
Nick Olas
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I do not mean to be rude, but I don't get why these people are giving it 5 stars. It's fan-fiction, so the bar for standards are not very high. With that being said, this is not very good. Horrible grammar is the most notable technical issue, followed by the weird formatting. The author clearly has no experience with (and has done no research on) what combat looks like and what tactics work and what gets people killed. None of the agents in the book make any sound tactical decisions and especially don't act like they are trained government agents. It comes off as someone with no idea what they are doing trying to confidently imply that they do. I don't mean to be overly harsh, but the 5-star reviews are not indicative of the quality of the work. I don't want to discourage you by reviewing this low, but also I don't want to give you a false impression that this is anywhere near 5-star quality.
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