The Rise of Herobrine - Book 1: He Will Rise..

I couldn't even finish the book because the writing was so bad. There were several grammatical errors, such as proper nouns, like character's names, not being capitalized and a lot of run-on sentences. The book is written from the first person perspective of Steve, but it's done poorly. I can already tell that the story is rushed and I only got 3 chapters into the book, which is halfway through. So, halfway in there is still no mention of their main goal. There's no development of the characters at all and the love plot is especially rushed. After having known each other for less than a day Alex kisses Steve on the cheek. In chapter 3 there is a big continuity error. Directly after meeting Alex, Steve calls his dog Spot. His dog's name is Bruno. While I don't expect continuity to be perfect, character's names shouldn't randomly change. It's just not a book I recommend. 1/10. If the author is reading this, sorry about the bad review, but this just isn't a good book. Sorry.

I don't really understand why, but like, why is there no proper English? I enjoyed the book but whoever made this book probably needs to remake it with better English. I'm not sending hate to the creator but I feel like this story is almost completely different to the real Minecraft. I know the main characters are Steve and Alex, but who's Jenifer? Or whoever she was. I don't have to say this twice but, I'm not sending any hate. This means I agree with some other users. I don't like books this way, although

This book lacks continuity, character development, and relashonships. This book was supposed to be romantic but we barley get and relatable romantic struggles and thing just happen out of nowhere. Tips: 1.make it realistic:just because its Minecraft doesent mean it can't be realistic, for example no one falls in love that fast. 2.make your main character a little bit interesting:character flaws are vital to the story making your character relatable(flaws are shown at act 1) With research you'll go far :)