
Why Not
The script is broken and the grammar is horrendous, there is no real stability for a storyline, however the drawings are adequate. So just work on your storyboarding and grammar and you might make a fine graphic novelist one day

Lapis “Bob” Lazuli
The drawings are.... Ok But the grammar was bad, I get it if other book writers have bad granger sometimes but dude.... Ur grammar went from the comic ALL the way to the sun ( if that made sense)

Fail King
I only read the sample and to be honest everything happened to soon. There is potential there for it to be a wonderful story! I wanna love it but I can't find it in myself to give 5 stars. So I give you 4.