Lost at the Pinnacles

Name: Lost at the Pinnacles
Rating: 4.400000095367432 (5 reviews)

Cody Tolmasoff

Aug 2020 · Poppy-Dahlia Adventure Book 1 · Adventuring.in

4.4

5 reviews

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252

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About this ebook

Immediately, Zoe saw the stress in Anna Dahlia’s eyes.

Now, lost at dusk without a flashlight, this weekend trip to Pinnacles National Park was much more than either of them had expected.

Caves, tarantulas, bats, lizards, feral pigs. Now, which way to the campsite?

Follow Anna Dahlia and her younger sister Zoe as they go on a surprise weekend camping trip with their father and some family friends for an unforgettable adventure.

♥Reading a book twice can dramatically improve reading comprehension for older elementary school and younger middle school students. Convincing your child to read a book twice is a lot to ask.

Why not make it interesting?

♥Included in this title are two complete books and some helpful bonus content. Read the first story from Anna Dahlia’s perspective, then read the second story from Zoe’s point of view for added details. 2 books in 1!

♥Enjoy either story on its own, or read them together for a more complete version.

♥Enjoy the bonus material and encourage a love for adventure by reading letters between the characters as they plan future trips.

♥Caregivers will appreciate story summaries and reader questions too!

And keep an eye out for the next book in the series:

Separated on the Paris Metro

Ratings and reviews

4.4

5 reviews

Melani Jo Howard Peppers

October 27, 2022

Considering that this author has touted this book as an educational tool to improve reading comprehension, I am extremely disappointed. While the story has potential, the book is filled with countless errors of punctuation, sentence structure, and grammar. The dialog is often stilted due in part to the lack of common contractions used in everyday conversational English, such as "we're," "can't," "don't," etc. Some unimportant details are excessively wordy, interrupting the flow of the story. The first run-on sentence is found near the beginning of the first chapter, and it just gets worse. All of these errors create confusion in the reader, not comprehension. If the author and publisher wish to emphasize the educational value of a book, they have the responsibility to provide a book that has educational value. Until these errors are rectified, this book's educational value lies only in teaching how to proofread. One star for its educational value. The story, however, is okay.

Harish Kumar Singh

April 14, 2021

I enjoyed it😌😌😌

About the author

Cody is a solo-parent-adventurer who regularly takes his two daughters all over the San Francisco Bay Area for weekend expeditions. A San Francisco native, he uses his life-long experience to keep trips fresh and new, researching new ideas, and always looking for the best options for walks, hiking, biking, climbing, and camping all around the Bay Area and beyond.

Sharing ideas for adventures with other parents and families has become a passion and the motivation behind writing these books.

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